The computer is a very powerful tool to help us work effectively. The computer computes fastly. And if you want the computer to do something, it will not say no. It will do that well step by step. There is no any argument.
The most important advantage of the computer is speed. Many componies develop many softwares to help us work effectively. In the past, the accounters complete the balance sheet with the calculator. Now they just enter the numbers and tell the computer how to calculate the numbers. And then the computer only spend several seconds. That is not only fast but also correct. Bsides, you do not pay it.
The another advantage of the computer is convenience. If we want to buy something only in America, we do not take airplane there to buy it. We can use the computer contact the Interent. Then you just need to find the shopping websites and buy it. After several days, the product will be sent to your home.
In conclusion, having a computer in the 21st centory is very necessary for you. These advantages have affected our life deeply. Not only is it convenient fot you, but it is helpful for your life as well. I can not think what will like if the computer is out of our lives.
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The computer is a very powerful tool to...=> i think it can be " a kink of powerful tool to..."
It will do that well step by step. There is no any argument...=> I think that it can be conbined to a sentance "It will do that well step by step without any argument..."
We can use the computer contact the Interent...=> there are two verbs in one sentance, it might be "to + V.ing."
I think you can pay attention to the connection between two sentances and it would be a better article.
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Ha, I can easily know why you choose the computer as your topic:)
There are many advantages by using computer,such as fast computation, high speed, and convenience that you already described. But I can give you one another idea. I think using a computer is useful for me to complete the homework,for example, in this class, I don't want to pay a lot of money to go to a cram school to study for English, then I can easily find a lot of study resources on the Internet. I think it's one of the important effects. Ha, but I just say what my thinking to you, to use it or not is depends on you.
And... maybe there are some disadvantage that we have to face, right. you could also write more about that.
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Here are some advices for you...
* In the past, the accounters complete(completed) the balance sheet with the calculator.
*And then the computer only spend several seconds (to claculate).
* Bsides(Besides), you do not (have to )pay(+for) it.
*The another(Another is okay) advantage of the computer ....
*Not only is it(it is) convenient fot(for) you, but it is helpful for(to) your life as well.
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:)Computer is really good and useful in our life. I want to buy a new computer>//<.
And it's really nice to read your article.
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