I have lived in the dormitory six years.So I clearly know what different living at home and in the dormitory.The dormitory is a public place.If you want to do something,you need to think about other people.Because you may influence other people.
I like to go to bed on one o'clock.But my classmates like to sleep lately.Of course they always go to class lately.Anyway,they always make a lot of noises ,and this let me hard to sleep.At my home,I can sleep very comfortably.I have much personal place.
In the dormitory,you need to do everything by yourself.The other people will not do something for you.You need to learn how to grow up.Unlike living at home,your mother will wash the clothes or be ready the fruit.Your father will fix the electric product.But in the dormitory,you can't do nothing.You can't just watch TV or play games.
But I think it also has a lot of advantages.I can go to class slowly.Beacause I don't need to spend much time on traffic.Especially some students live very far to school.Like some of my classmates,they need to spend about one hour to go to school.
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your reasons are very detail, but I couldn't find out the topic sentence. If you can clearly add the topic sentence, it's will be great.
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your essay is very clealy,I can realize wha you what to tell the different of living in domitory and home.Maybe you can make a conclutoin to let us know you like domitory more or home more?
by the way
I don't understand what the sentence mean:But in the dormitoryyou can't do nothingYou can't just watch TV or play games.
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